2011年6月18日下午四六级落下帷幕,酷学网将于第一时间为考生收集整理最新试题及答案,以下为六级高分范文:
The Certificate Craze
There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailingtrend for people to take part in various exams with the purpose of obtaining certificates of many kinds: that forCET-4 or CET-6, that for computer level, the driver’s license,etc。
Of course people pursue certificates for various purposes. Someclaim that owning these certificates can give them more edge incompetition. One more certificate means a bit more chance of winning in the job market. Others, however, merely take this practice as a stimulus for them to study or study harder. They assert that, by working for those certificates, they can broadentheir horizon and enrich their knowledge。
Personally, I believe that one should choose to learn what he or she truly likes or really needs, instead of merely working for some certificates.As for me, I shall focus my energy on a few fields, for I believe concentration of attention and energy is the key to success.Besides, keen interest is the strongest motivation for study. To bespecific, I would like to learn kungfu and Beijing Opera inmy spare time. I may attend some relevant tests and be awardedcertain certificates, but they are just a natural result of mystudy, instead of my motivation。
点评:
本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题——高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格,关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说,考生还是比较好把握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因,考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外,在保证句法通顺的前提下,尽可能做到表达的多样化。
首先,在考生拿到题目的时候,应该先认真审题,心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个底。提起证书热的话,很多考生都会联想到就业压力,学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求;因此,全文可做如下安排;
第一段,考生陈述了目前社会人们因不同的目的去考证,因此存在的考证热现象;
第二段,考生对考证热的目的进行了详细阐述:人们的考证的目的不尽相同,更多人是为了就业更有竞争力;但还是有少数人是为了锻炼和检测自己,为了学习过程而参加考证的。
第三段,考生表明了自己的观点。
综合来讲,本篇文章观点明确,思路清晰,此外,文章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是,由于时间和篇幅的限制,论证的展开还未完全挖掘出来,但在如此有限的条件下,可以称得上佳作了。