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英语六级作文范文及点评1

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学生家长互动我有问题要解答,我要提问?

  英语六级范文《成功之路》,作者首段问:什么是成功?不同的人有不同的答案,对于“我”来说,成功就是做自己想做的事情-success is doing something one really feels like doing.第二段提出了成功的三条必由之路 "what”“why”“how”。本篇英语六级作文范文既有亮点也有不足,考生们可以好好学习它的优点并避免缺点。

  The Way to Success

  Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. It’s indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing.

  To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream. In other words, they are “what” “why” and “how” of success. It’s really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful。

  Although it’s never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, you’ll be the one。

  【作文解析】

  这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”what is success?”,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨,而是直接引出了自己的观点:success is doing something one really feels like doing. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看,行文流畅,用语规范地道。

  本篇亮点:

  1. 排比词组或句子的运用:

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