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英语六级作文范文及点评2

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学生家长互动我有问题要解答,我要提问?

  英语六级范文《成功之路》,作者开段用爱迪生的名言点题,引出话题:什么是成功之路?坚强的意志是成功必不可少的条件。

  The Way to Success

  "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." And here comes our question, what is the way to success?

  A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success.

  Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty. A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.

  Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed.

  To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way.

  【作文解析】

  本次六级作文题为The way to success,与本次四级考试作文Nothing succeeds without a strong will遥相呼应,大同小异,都是在讨论成功这一话题。

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