i said to my mum, let me look after this little thing. my mum said, “are you sure you can?” “ yes ,believe me i can.” i answered. then mum went to the kitchen. i went towards my baby brother. “ oh baby, don’t cry. i will sing a song for you…” i carried him and sing songs for him. after a while, he was asleep. i was so tired. my parents were happy and praised me a good boy. this is my first time to look after my baby brother and i feel proud of myself.

原文翻译：

　我是一个10岁的男孩。聪明和帅气。我为自己感到骄傲。因为我可以得到完美的中文，数学和英语成绩。它不够好，我也自豪作为一个兄长。那是一个星期五的晚上，我的弟弟哭了所有的时间。我的父母都是为晚餐准备。

 

　　我说我的妈妈，让我照顾这个小东西。我妈妈说，“你确定你可以吗？”“是的，相信我，我可以。”我回答。“ 然后妈妈去了厨房。我去对我的弟弟。“哦，宝贝，不要哭。我会为你唱的一首歌......“我抱着他，为他唱的歌曲。一段时间后，他就睡着了。我太累了。我的父母很高兴，并赞扬我一个好孩子。这是我第一次看后，我的小弟弟，我觉得为自己感到骄傲。