人物是高二学生经常写的，有关人物的作文可以从多方面来进行描述，例如外貌、事件。哪些事情会给我们带来影响，对我们的今后生活有帮助。

　　My Father

　　Father was my first teacher and is my dear friend. When I was a little girl, I used to sit on my father's knees, listening to his stories. The story"Two friends and a Bear"told me"a friend in need is a friend indeed."I will never forget the story"Madame Curie"which tells me a truth"where there is a will,there is a way."Father's stories enriched my life and did a lot of good to my growth.

　　When I was seven years old,I started primary school.I was young,so my father picked me up from school every day.On the way,I told father everything that happened at school.Father listened carefully and always smiled happily. Sometimes I sang a beautiful song. My sweet and lovely voice gave my father the greatest pride.My father is always proud of me. He hopes I will make great progress in my study. Now I have made up my mind to study harder and harder.

　　I'm sure my father's love will lead me to my success and I will love him forever!

　　点评：作者写的很用心，有些句子和语法运用的很得当，并通过一两件小事，写出了父爱。