一年有四季,我最喜欢春节,因为春天万物复苏,一年之计在于春。当然每个人的想法都不一样,也有人会喜欢其他季节,你喜欢哪个季节呢?
season
There are four seasons in the year. spring, summer, fall, and winter,but I like winter best.
In winter we can play skiing, play skatting, and bit snow.I and my friend mary, make snowman.I am very happy.
Winter is very beautiful. So I like winter best. I hope people like winter best.
点评:文章很多生僻单词,值得表扬,并写出了喜欢冬季的理由,语法时态都运用准确。